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lmy123

2018-04-25 提交的作品

本人是电子商务转电商美工，色彩搭配和排版都是纠结了大半天没有做好，最后交图时间到了，将就着交了，希望老师能指导指导，万分感谢！

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米田的天空

米田的天空

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2018-05-03 点评

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总评：
一般对颜色把握不住时，需要先考虑将其转成黑白稿，看看其明暗关系是否合理。进一步上色处理，理论上多彩色是最难把控的，成熟的设计师都很难处理。一般技巧是，可以先进行双色处理，再三色，再四色，不过我们使用最多是三色，其余可以通过透明度调整变化。

调整建议：
1）字体字号缩小
2）定一种主色，现在黄色和粉红色比例基本是对等
3）因为你追求是活泼的主题，需要减少方方正正图片的感觉
4）可以参考 http://img.hb.aicdn.com/5de25c1a6ea4f9d8620036d58516cda0da61958393ddf9-MneclM_fw658

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