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2018-04-28 提交的作品

老板比较满意，我觉得还是哪里怪怪的，希望老师们帮我看看

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米田的天空

米田的天空

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总评：
有几张比较出彩，当然可能是模特比较好的情况。一般自己拿到工作，首先会考虑素材和主题的关系。譬如这里是美瞳的产品，眼睛部分应该是最重要的展示。以此分析，眼睛部分应该着重处理。再返回来看我们这套设计，会发现，每个模特似乎都没有带美瞳。虽然我不是女生，但是，带了美瞳的眼睛应该不是这样的。

所以修改建议如下：
1）眼睛部分增加美瞳的效果
2）部分文字与背景黏贴在一起，让两者的距离感增加
3）突出产品特性的方法可以参考 http://huaban.com/pins/1396606868/

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