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蚊子姑娘Ally

2018-05-28 提交的作品

总是觉得画面不规整，扁平缺少设计感，而且不知无从下手

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孙圣朝

孙圣朝

编排设计／画册／海报

2018-05-29 点评

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留白不足，表现形式俗套、陈旧，最大的问题就是原设计师对于信息层级和文字的行间距、字间距没有概念，基本上是在凭感觉排版。

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