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老师：
您好！接触家具行业有半年了，不管是大促还是日常活动。做的页面也不少。第一：感觉做的页面都很平，细节细腻度不够第二：排版布局变动不大，基本一个样式用了大半年，只是在利益点和颜色上做了小小变动。自己又不知道怎么优化，希望老师抽点时间指点一下。谢谢

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2018-03-19 点评

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总评：
作品的意见都在图片中做了标注，我的建议是应该多去浏览优秀的作品，多去看，多去总结。
只有看的多了，才可以提高自己的审美能力。接下来就是多做，提高自己的技巧。
同学加油吧~

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