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丝绸之路普天同庆

字体设计

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总评：
1、做字体设计识别性是最重要的，不要破坏汉字的基本结构，不要搞得做完后只有你自己晓得。
2、慎用字间连接，若连接遵循笔划的走势，顺其自然的连接是最佳的方式，切记野蛮强行连接。不要认为做字必须要都连上！
3、简化必要用力过猛，遵循汉字基本就够理智的去简化，笔划少的字不要做简化！
4、断笔要有一定的规律，不要满处乱断，把字拆的四零八落。
5、装饰性的纹样，要与字形和谐相处，不要为了添加导致过于拥挤。
做字是一个修为的过程，只要坚持在路上，定会越来越好！祝你一帆风顺！我的朋友~~

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