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请大神指点一下，这样的设计是否合格

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这四幅画面没有太大的差别，在我看来都是一张图，问题也都一样；太过于追求形式化，而忽视了设计的本质，简单的理解就是太注重于因设计而设计了。还是要回到以人为本，以实用为原则的出发来做设计。

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