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老师您好，很高兴您能给我们指点作品，这是我的作品，请您指点，感谢您的建议。知道您也是福州的所以期待您的点评。
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总评：
这个网页整体来说，大元素过多，导致整体显得不太精致。所以调整方向从这点出发。

1）除了大字号，需要将部分不是那么重要的信息分组处理，即增加小字号的元素
2）为了增加统一性，可以考虑删减元素，譬如这里线性的元素比较精致，可以考虑多增加这方面的元素
3）减少不一致的元素，譬如卡通图标和线框图标，要只保留一种
4）增加些色调变化，具体可以参考 http://huaban.com/pins/1651159945/

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